Is this a good mothers day card poem?

you cook you clean and you work


and i never said thank you


well now is the time to say it


thank you mom for all you do


i never say i love you


although i lnow its true


i know you love me too


you loved me from the start


and all through the years


but i never showed i love you too


i love you mom for all you do


sometimes you yell


sometimes you cry


but all through the pain


you love me every day


i never say goodbye


when you leave for work


i never say goodnoght when


i go to sleep


i never do anything


to show how i love you


but today is the day


to show you i care


today is the da to say


i love you mom


all through the years

Is this a good mothers day card poem?
That's a really nice poem, and I think your mom will like it. But now that you realized that you could say more to your mom. Start saying something nice to her everyday, because it isn't easy being a mom. And one day when you have kids you will look back and be glad that you were nice to your mom...
Reply:it doesn't rhyme and to me it just sounds like butt kissing....





however I'm not close with my mom so I'd never write her a poem. I'll buy her a card and whatever else...I spent good money on her though... :)
Reply:Its good but doesnt that show you just how much you take your mom for granted??? If i gave my mom that it would show her I'm sorry for that but it'd make me feel kinda crappy
Reply:ANY mother would adore that you even wrote a poem. It's beautiful! Leave it the way it is!
Reply:its good but you should rewrite a lil bit of it put a lil more love in it
Reply:I am a mother and I think that is a excellent poem except you just need to go back and correct your spelling for the word "good night." The poem is beautiful and I'm sure that it will mean the world to your mother. You are putting this in your own words of how you feel about your mother. That is more appealing then any card that you may find in any store. I am a poet myself and I will recommend you to send your poem off to get it published.
Reply:It comes from the heart %26amp; those are always the best kind.
Reply:yes because it came from your heart
Reply:well i'm a mum a it brought a tear to my eye. she will love it, don't change a thing. you sound like a great daughter.
Reply:It's okay .. use it if you want ... but you might want to try something else that really shows her that you care.





Here's something creative that will be appreciated and you will have fun doing:





Make up a crossword puzzle and have all the hints be personal inside moments and jokes that only you two and family would know about. Put it on a poster board and add some clipart and some pictures to it!





The crossword puzzle could be time consuming and a bit frustrating ... you could do the same idea with a WORDSEARCH or WORDFIND puzzle.





Put your computer skills to work! Use Excel, get clipart from Yahoo Images Search, copy them, and reformat them, use a gluestick to put on posterboard.





Use graph paper, and pictures from magazines if you are not as good on the computer, and it will give it a homemade feeling.





This is a really beautiful poem too!


Women have strengths that amaze us.


They carry children, they carry hardships, they carry burdens but they hold happiness, love and joy.


They smile when they want to scream.


They sing when they want to cry.


They cry when they are happy and laugh when they are nervous.


They fight for what they believe in.


They stand up for injustice.


They don't take "no" for an answer when they believe there is a better solution.


They go without new shoes so their children can have them.


They go to the doctor with a frightened friend.


They love unconditionally.


They cry when their children excel and cheer when their friends get awards.


They are happy when they hear about a birth or a new marriage. Their hearts break when a friend dies.


They have sorrow at the loss of a family member, yet they are strong when they think there is no strength left.


They know that a hug and a kiss can heal a broken heart.


Women come in all sizes, in all colors and shapes.


They'll drive, fly, walk, run or e-mail you to show how much they care about you.


The heart of a woman is what makes the world spin!


Women do more than just give birth.


They bring joy and hope.


They give compassion and ideals.


They give moral support to their family and friends.


Women have a lot to say and a lot to give.











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Reply:Thats Great. God bless!
Reply:straight from the heart! what could be better. It,s excellent!!
Reply:it started really well then went on and on and on and on and on
Reply:Yes

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