How does this sound on a mothers day card?

dear mum


happy mothers day! you are the greatest mother in the world, you honestly mean the world to me, you are just a super duper awesome mum.


you mean to much to me, i love you to the moon and back a million times! words can not express how much you mean to me and how much i care about you!











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what you think





what else can i add


or take


or fix?

How does this sound on a mothers day card?
AWESOME BABES YOU GO AHEAD ITS GREAT
Reply:I like it! You sound sincere. What you have sounds great but if you're looking to add more you might want to thank her for something specific like taking care of you when you were ill/ sick, rescuing from bad decision, or perhaps for the great cookies and milk she made served up with a smile
Reply:You have too many mean's and me's and the second mean too much to me is misspelt and should probably read 'mean so much to me' anyway... Cheers, give your mum a kiss from me...
Reply:if thats how you feel about your mum and you are happy with what you wrote, then leave it as is
Reply:is it's written 4m d heart..then leave it as it is


your mom will surely appreciate it!